Criterion D – Reflecting
Australia Under Fire is a play written by Ilo McDonald and Nik Krastev. It is a play about how human impact affects the fires in Sydney, Australia. We described the issue and the causes of it. There are elements of tragedy and determination involved in the artwork. In this essay we will visit the SOI (Artists draw attention to issues of human impact on the environment (locally or globally), view how learning was transferred into this artwork, and we will view a critique of the play.
My play draws attention to the problems caused by humans on the environment. This happens in many different forms, such as air pollution, water pollution, and sea levels rising. The artwork presented by Nik and I is a play focused on the way that humans make the world dryer. Our target area where this was a real problem is Australia, in the province of New South Wales. The activities which result in ecosystems getting dryer are clearing forests, promoting grazing, dispersing plants, altering ignition patterns and actively suppressing fires. In the play, Mr. Kelvin Jones (Nik) has recently lost his son and has a wife in the hospital as a result of the raging wildfires in Sydney. He draws attention to this issue by going to see the Environmental Minister Mr. Waldorf (Ilo), describing the issue, and gives reasons why this issue happened in the first place. He mentions that humans play a large part in increasing the risk of wildfires as the climate, as a result, gets drier. He then presents an argument in the way that he would like to provoke Mr. Waldorf to help the issue in any way he can. In the end, they both become climate change activists. Artists have a responsibility to speak out about the impact humans have on the environment to the extent that they can manipulate or provoke the audience into seeing the effects first-hand. The artists know that they have an audience that wants to see what the artists do. This means they can incorporate elements in their artwork that show the audience this issue and the negative effects.
I have transferred my learning into my play in the way that we have focused a lot in the past about flash drama. In past units we learned the processes and techniques used in flash drama. Since we made a flash drama play there was a lot of consideration of the specific characteristics. Another way I incorporated my learning from task 1 into the play is that when I critiqued the two plays, I learned a lot about what makes a flash drama performance appealing. They only use one location and time, otherwise it becomes too much for the allotted time. These plays also often have a singular issue. This permits them to focus on that issue in depth during the play. There were only 2 characters in my performance, and both had a significant role. The protagonist changed drastically by quitting his job in my performance. He did this to make a difference, and it was crucial to the storyline. There was an absence of subplot because the time limit only permitted us to focus on the main issue which were the wildfires. There was also minimal scenery and props. In our play we used a desk, a phone, a computer, and some clothes suited to the characters.
The plot of the play Australia Under Fire is about an Environmental Minister who is persuaded to quit his job and become a climate activist by a man who has lost everything to one of the many wildfires/bushfires in Australia. In the beginning of the performance, Kelvin walks into the office determined for answers and help. He was distraught following the death of his son and the injuries of his wife due to a recent wildfire that reached his home. He cannot fathom losing his son, and now possibly his wife, to something that humans caused due to their own selfish and negligent behavior. How can he turn a blind eye to the irreversible damage humans caused when it has left him without being able to protect the one thing he loved more than life; his son. Now, it feels too real that the mother of his child will fall victim to the same self-serving beast. He has to make someone understand the impact of this tragedy on human life. He is stressed and is desperate to seek justice and has decided that the Environmental Minister will be able to help him with his issue. He wants the Environmental Minister to do something to prevent future wildfires by putting policy into place. This seems like the only way to make this issue easier for Kelvin to deal with the pain. When Kelvin barges into the Environmental Minister’s office he is met with a very defensive man full of obstinance. How dare Kelvin think that he can meet with a government official. Mr. Waldorf is very reluctant to listen to yet one more person complaining about wildfires, because he knows his hands are tied, but as the conversation continues he begins to realize that Kelvin is not just another person but in fact he is one man who has lost his entire reason for living. If it can get any worse the very man standing in front of him is about to lose his wife as well. This is the turning point when Mr. Waldorf becomes overwhelmed with sympathy for Kelvin as he begins to outwardly grieve his own wife who he also lost to a wildfire. He realises that the Environmental Minister does not have the power to make a significant change sitting behind his desk, and Kelvin convinces him that more change can come from someone who is willing to put his life on the line fighting for what they believe in, a climate activist. When Mr. Waldorf understands that a powerful and passionate group can have more effect than one man behind a desk he decides to join forces with Kelvin. The main purpose of this play is to focus on the problem of the dryness and fires due to the human impact on the environment of Australia. The issue it is dealing with is the fires in Australia. The intended audience is the drama class and the pupils in it. The skills used in the play were emotions, storyline, reasoning, and making realistic points related to the SOI. These skills were used to come together and make a play that will succeed. The purpose of this play was achieved quite well. This was because the characters were played to the extent that the plot described the issue and the specific solution for this issue. The emotion was represented very well and when the Environmental Minister broke down crying it was very heartfelt and moving to the audience. Also, the points Kelvin was making about the fire and how it destroyed his life is relatable for some people in Australia who were also negatively affected by this disaster. This play was aimed to be descriptive and moving. It achieved this goal because it felt like a play which made people think about the message. There are a few strengths in my play that are very important. It was very directly representative of the SOI. We also offered a solution to the presented issue in the way that both characters became climate change activists because they had an issue/motive in common. Another strength is that our characters both had experiences with the fires so they could relate to each other. They wanted to help because of what the fires took from them, leaving their lives in chaos. A point to improve is making our emotions believable. Maybe we could have put more emphasis on the fact that he actually had no power as the Environmental Minister and the real power lies in the hands of the Prime Minister who acts on pressure from the public. Also, it was a bit anticlimactic the way he just called and quit his job, we could have built in more suspense by having him doing something more subtle like taking off his name tag from his desk. Sometimes the less obvious the actions in the play are, the bigger the impact is of the certain action. An example of this being hard to believe is when the Environmental Minister breaks down crying. It just doesn’t seem believable. Another point to improve is our planning for the play. It took us a very long time to plan for the play and get started, resulting in less time to rehearse the play.
To conclude, our play was quite successful. It showed the statement of inquiry blatantly. It also visited a problem caused by human activity. Our play intended to educate the audience about this issue and showed what some people are doing as a result of climate change and how to act positively upon it. The performance is starring two men who have been severely affected by wildfires in Australia, which is a real-life issue. They try to do the best they can to make a positive impact on the environment.